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6 [( c' X" f6 L听《爸爸的梦想》有感， 为原版远方译写
/ y5 k1 X5 u1 p* [0 Q0 v. R2 ^《爸爸的梦想》－祝父亲节快乐！ 2 B8 X' e* e( j! e& K2 x
"Father's Dream"
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作词：原版远方 作曲：谭锦明4 S, K" w( @/ B# R9 N8 a
配器：于 洋 男声首唱：于 洋 女声首唱：小卵石& c- A8 x2 f4 X% K* I- L
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远方湖面，白帆络绎，小艇荡漾，傍晚骤雨，巨虹悬空。入夜小镇，一年一次，音乐节日，顿时，异域庞克，Rock飞乐，倒是激情，喧闹异常。几近午夜，竟彩焰升空，似银柳翠空，仲夏艳丽，簇拥万情。
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: i0 z# o9 ~/ j3 T* r# o2 M当人去街宁，打开邮箱，久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲，来自远方，不亦乐乎，此君好文，原版笔墨，力透荧屏，未曾晤面，共鸣无限，神交网路，其乐融融。迫不及待，点击便听，链接奉上：
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者，不为上乘。而此曲，乐起悠扬，初起清新童稚，转而深沉励志，继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀，写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬，山高水长，听来复去，已韵入胸膛。
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当感动涟涟，润浸眼眶，就不得不让心中的连动，留在了纸上。5 @0 D @3 i# s/ M* s( J {
是否，就它，叠一纸鹤，放飞而去，捎给远方。
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于洋男声版：. H8 }3 t4 t8 M! l3 Y- _
http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-yuyang.htm; H t; f% R4 G, Z/ A, z( a. ]
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3 X- l4 p+ i; K/ _2 eAuthor: 远方
# Q/ }) v8 ^; o& M% cComposer: Tan Jinming- v2 N2 n1 g) C, b2 d8 K% p
Orchestration: Yu Yang8 q$ u% m" ^( ~; C' \1 u
Singer Male : Yu Yang/ k2 _- u5 r$ E x0 ~
Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
$ Q3 g0 S0 L6 M* R 《爸爸的梦想》－祝父亲节快乐！
+ ~0 ^& W6 s, W; V 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗* R& s! _( V" P
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想: z6 N9 _2 ?" r) A
为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
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' E9 A g: W+ LThe first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
S: R# }2 s: p6 F1 Thills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old.
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a legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei% i: ?+ n4 b5 q7 e6 y8 T
1 o* O" h6 M5 G小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡
& t5 a, K( Y: l4 Z$ U6 e重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
% l$ l W5 Z( B4 _$ U好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航8 V6 [2 n5 y, b ]" `% H, d
上下求索之路并不漫长
6 z6 Q% Q# [2 KMany times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes,
$ J0 _* [7 H' P" f, Wspoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old, . o1 s3 W: u7 f* z
Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world,
Z1 d& r, H: T- [( Z) A, J: uBeijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, % a4 b f3 I; L9 H! z6 f5 i
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road. ' |5 A# T: x+ O7 h) E+ L
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十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量+ ~2 V/ n" [' j% h
坚定着方向带着期望
$ ]* e4 _7 e' L4 T% ?( v终于走在纽约的大街上
1 L% K, @8 W* u6 l0 R$ Z+ u这就是传说中的世界之窗* `: t, a7 x% W/ f, ]6 K7 `
Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls 2 X4 ^; U: J; C$ ^9 g
on my desk into a window, tall and long
) |4 b1 E/ f5 `4 V1 g1 Mmy dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall,
5 @& i- K) S: m; ^, nfirm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows ' F$ Y5 ?) s# `' v) o" |
7 y6 c# p# \, g( k9 \% z飞过蓝天，飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯( x: M! m$ n9 A8 P
记不住阴晴，记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发$ Q6 N) M8 d" c o0 z+ _+ }. O
Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.% \+ _$ d2 D- c0 P, z+ s
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see, . C/ h# P: \, V7 F
Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
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山不再高，路不再长
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忘记了悲欢，忘记了离合7 _3 N4 n4 o) _/ {
却忘不了爸爸儿时的梦想, j6 M; y$ p1 O3 y6 N4 {
Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,
& `/ W E9 p; Q/ yfootprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills,
7 F' d2 d. F. S& Q# L, YHappy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old,
5 Y* ^& S% B4 sDaddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told,
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jave, Andy：诺君能喜欢，吾心足矣！
发表于 2010-6-20 17:55
我有一样的感触
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