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, k5 i3 y5 `+ N0 f1 p5 \5 ?& A听《爸爸的梦想》有感， 为原版远方译写! |5 |/ y0 R3 u. T
《爸爸的梦想》－祝父亲节快乐！ 0 X# g; x( y, o% x% E
"Father's Dream"
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作词：原版远方 作曲：谭锦明
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' F( X+ ^7 H( @. V' I; b远方湖面，白帆络绎，小艇荡漾，傍晚骤雨，巨虹悬空。入夜小镇，一年一次，音乐节日，顿时，异域庞克，Rock飞乐，倒是激情，喧闹异常。几近午夜，竟彩焰升空，似银柳翠空，仲夏艳丽，簇拥万情。, s( K, ?6 T; \+ M1 d; O' e
8 q4 `. x, {; X5 h9 Y# s: t当人去街宁，打开邮箱，久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲，来自远方，不亦乐乎，此君好文，原版笔墨，力透荧屏，未曾晤面，共鸣无限，神交网路，其乐融融。迫不及待，点击便听，链接奉上：$ L7 R# Z7 J1 z7 y$ E2 h
4 n6 Y) b4 k; @# y) y- `$ d: |7 K7 ?一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者，不为上乘。而此曲，乐起悠扬，初起清新童稚，转而深沉励志，继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀，写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬，山高水长，听来复去，已韵入胸膛。8 m0 ^* w" }1 ^, b
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当感动涟涟，润浸眼眶，就不得不让心中的连动，留在了纸上。& O3 w) s- k: v( E9 Q2 C* x
是否，就它，叠一纸鹤，放飞而去，捎给远方。
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于洋男声版：
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小卵石女声版：
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Author: 远方4 P5 U6 i" B/ e; g) w" n( g" J
Composer: Tan Jinming' W$ L/ ~3 @6 u) O6 L+ u
Orchestration: Yu Yang
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Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi1 b1 F9 M' A; W* a8 \4 F- @, K
《爸爸的梦想》－祝父亲节快乐！/ H9 n) o/ _8 c9 A3 j- R/ Z
小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗6 H. y2 W9 ?7 m5 L( Y& L/ Y
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想
! M" T! j7 Y! k为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
( M' z1 L: s2 O0 z那是传说中的人间天堂" W' ?; }9 W. b2 d7 ^: R) o1 }
The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little, ! ~7 o, f9 E2 z# W
hills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. * N0 u8 a A' d3 g: d
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.9 J" K- F( }3 P* ~' _6 f& w
a legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei8 ^0 {, N1 t% b7 D6 e* V
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小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡) V! Q# o8 ]+ c+ L/ C
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望$ s; w8 ~9 I& ^" I
好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航
: q( u& e) F2 P% Q6 I上下求索之路并不漫长) \3 \8 s2 n) X" ~$ t$ y2 b2 t
Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes,
; z5 U/ }" _9 b, O8 ospoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old,
h. U. Q' |, t4 WGood boy, go, across the oecean and see the world,
$ [1 X6 L6 h8 f8 b+ bBeijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe,
; [- H# e, C& p6 @5 Y `; ltrips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road.
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十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量% d5 x# n4 V ?! p
坚定着方向带着期望
# ^: \8 f5 }* B4 [6 p' y- M& L0 C终于走在纽约的大街上
- }* P% [! x3 `9 r: f5 f# C这就是传说中的世界之窗3 A3 |3 `2 E: C0 ~3 J3 g' B7 x& q% m" g
Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls ( a0 j3 c' s# x8 Z, W
on my desk into a window, tall and long
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firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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飞过蓝天，飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯
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Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.
5 U K; z" z& F; [+ MSunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see, 7 }% N0 y! b2 H. c M8 U# @1 S
Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
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山不再高，路不再长
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忘记了悲欢，忘记了离合
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. N F. J: |4 z2 J0 y+ N# P* _Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,: c* O- \8 [9 W* @: m" D
footprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills, - t) N9 p3 s8 a; ]
Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old, 9 D2 j; X! ?4 z/ ?1 M4 H
Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, . ]3 l8 d5 a- }1 A l
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发表于 2010-6-20 12:03
jave, Andy：诺君能喜欢，吾心足矣！3 _+ q+ Y( z0 b- H
发表于 2010-6-20 17:55
我有一样的感触