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原版远方《留学恋歌》原创系列-译写
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周末译趣
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【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。
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& M  D) i7 i% n+ S2 O1 Y【译记】
: z' D+ c% o3 W0 z" y9 N% Q-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean.   l% E) E$ ]1 [7 V  E8 m. ~2 v
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原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...
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走遍天涯 追寻梦想
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让无悔的青春闪烁光芒
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Sun shines from south to north, we dream a dream,
# r! e* \0 R" W/ u+ Tin darkest nights, stars like Angle's eyes, blinks bravo,
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走过曲折 志在四方
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Old countries and cities new, left behind, wills like steel, 0 c& d: f, I- h: w" o. W
Our hearts beat young, never old,
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" {: ~! ^5 |3 N. J( h# U架起连通中西的桥梁2 p9 O$ a! b  v* X, |
上下求索处处桃李芬芳
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Across East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle,
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We try and discover, the Gold, in a century well,
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Hand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh, ( {. F9 X. f9 X! V( F) Z7 v
we produce miracle, A new birth, of a brilliant tomorrow
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Photo, by 四川 爱思网 石川先生,Authorized by 24en.com, zhou
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【译后的话】赠此次
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8 G( B' E: x9 f8 ?安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!. Q. f/ a' e# a
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Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote
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今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,8 m: Y2 o- p7 N. ]/ m0 p3 z

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Read original, " ^7 H8 a7 w8 L
http://www.hamiltonchinese.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=6053&extra=page%3D1
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-22 14:55 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-29 16:00 | 显示全部楼层

Maybe they don't really like it!

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I don't know, maybe people are shy? Maybe people don't really enjoy it! 8 T2 D  C  ~9 _% ~/ X/ ], p
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