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听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写
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"Father's Dream" $ b4 L( \- h+ d4 O
-Happy Father's Day
9 }. v. h4 K. x 作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明
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& {- g: F! w3 [2 |7 M远方湖面,白帆络绎,小艇荡漾,傍晚骤雨,巨虹悬空。入夜小镇,一年一次,音乐节日,顿时,异域庞克,Rock飞乐,倒是激情,喧闹异常。几近午夜,竟彩焰升空,似银柳翠空,仲夏艳丽,簇拥万情。* `+ p' G; i' X \ E8 A
( t' y+ h9 b- ~0 r当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。# _8 I. `# v5 Q& T( j/ ?
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当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。
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于洋男声版:" r* j5 ]3 y0 y* G2 _6 Q( E
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7 f7 Y5 t f; @7 g- h2 QAuthor: 远方
/ T7 p4 S/ H/ S5 @9 Q# uComposer: Tan Jinming
; _- }3 o; r2 n H5 J2 I1 OOrchestration: Yu Yang
" Z/ E1 {$ s: @$ z5 Q0 { V* |Singer Male : Yu Yang
4 R0 ]; V8 c! ~* ^Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
$ g* g# u( A6 \; J' C2 t4 u 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!. u: v$ _6 F* h
小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗
# k# t1 w, r0 ~, m望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想: t# r- G1 I/ y6 G1 k* L6 O M, A+ j
为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁6 M- ~0 P2 J/ H6 ]4 V
那是传说中的人间天堂
t3 }& L# o' X7 r. G/ i8 kThe first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little, + s4 r: a i. ^- _6 w
hills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. ) |2 }# ?* O! K. t9 M
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
& P6 V. |% u+ s5 P2 a% @3 x pa legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei: Q' e3 K, n7 U2 \9 F& A2 n9 B
1 X( z$ j) n" E, a0 l2 T3 Z2 l小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡 e1 e8 j6 F* _6 z5 [+ O, t* N6 ?
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
, A; ?" @6 P6 d0 J0 \好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航
% Y* n) p- r! n; O, g上下求索之路并不漫长
7 ~( O# {7 N7 I+ nMany times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes, ( G. l! H3 p, }% J
spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old, " X4 K2 f0 s W1 {* \) a, ?8 D) z
Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, 1 Q2 ]+ s, H5 u z4 ~
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, $ v. W. j) f2 K/ y' Y |$ v$ }3 {
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road.
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( N" C8 {5 [" h! h p十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量
, `3 H8 O7 K, f坚定着方向带着期望
2 S, e W3 s# E9 s终于走在纽约的大街上
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Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls 8 U3 H5 [3 p- w( g! Z5 l
on my desk into a window, tall and long ! h$ l4 w8 w- ^; {( V1 q! z! @% j' d
my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall,
/ ^3 v$ |( o) Z4 ?firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯
# `% m& h' K, D/ k5 b6 w/ ~记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发
9 t$ X/ R& q/ e! fEagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.
2 C; x( f; h. L4 L+ x5 dSunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see,
; @0 m' E0 h$ j2 }* I0 P1 S5 ISummers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
1 w- [0 T9 S% u9 _' OMoon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites. 9 I! A' ~& I, j) ~( E% B
' j3 m" b h! l. D0 e6 o3 Q山不再高,路不再长( M( g' R, S1 w5 D+ Q B
一串串脚印伸向远方
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Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow, T( {* [, G/ j* ~" m! K
footprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills,
# J6 |# v1 M. R1 |& \( ]! q7 ] S: qHappy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old, ; |& c9 ]5 N2 \ Q
Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told,
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