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' r2 Q4 B6 O' j8 f【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。
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, j) p0 w  R$ O6 p9 Q0 A, X0 ^* p-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean.
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! C' _2 R7 n1 C2 K* a7 n) |原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...

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"A bridge built, called miracle" / }0 f6 l" [8 P  ^. k+ s0 b

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走遍天涯 追寻梦想  S( l% X, U  V1 \/ [' v- D5 l
展开翅膀 勇敢地飞翔
/ w! u" A4 r& K: o每个细胞都充满希望
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Sun shines from south to north, we dream a dream, + K+ Y9 D3 V% \9 d0 n+ d5 W
in darkest nights, stars like Angle's eyes, blinks bravo,
! T) t$ s! \) D! m. m  wshines the hope, in every pause, and every cells
! R4 L$ E2 _9 l3 c+ o8 M+ I! wshines, forever, A pretty girl in spring,  morning, brings a miracle,
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走过曲折 志在四方
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天使的温暖救死扶伤
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Old countries and cities new, left behind, wills like steel,
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Angle's lips warm, sweet, never cold
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Across East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle,
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We try and discover, the Gold, in a century well, & J) p1 z" `- K! V
search, from deep heart to an inner soul,7 x5 s( q5 M2 y- [0 z' _
Hand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh,
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Photo, by 四川 爱思网 石川先生,Authorized by 24en.com, zhou
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【译后的话】赠此次
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安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!
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" R5 \( L' }# y$ A. r Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote
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4 B+ T. N  P0 R; j  m: O* J 今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-22 14:55 | 显示全部楼层
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% }  r2 X- c1 o+ t1 c# G% Ngood, but why people doesnt comment?
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-29 16:00 | 显示全部楼层

Maybe they don't really like it!

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I don't know, maybe people are shy? Maybe people don't really enjoy it!
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