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" Take Charge, & Go green! "- Business writing, a note

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" Take Charge, & Go green! "

www.oeb.gov.on.ca

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To business owners ) T$ t& x: f7 Z8 S, D/ F

May 18, 2010


Hello,* a# g& p% |6 ]: Q1 C" { ' m5 V3 E0 u1 s1 Z1 P" [6 ~ Let's look at your hydro bills. The May usage above 600Kwh / 1,000 kWh will be charged no longer @0.067 but @0.075 Kwh (+12%) at regular tiered price. Fees, services, delivery, retirement charges and provincial benefit are "global adjustment". ...factored, regulated every 6 months, and showing a big jump. ) F O/ R2 }% {) f& { ! [! s, N% W$ y"Smart-Meter" prices went up, again, by 12%, effective May 01, Ontario. Businesses and homes will see increase on hydro bill by "Time of use" rate @ 0.099 / kWh, at "Peak Hours", "Go Green" is one of your options, stabilizing cost, free from the increase. 4 X& g: b& Q) s+ F5 F% l4 w*Ref. Official link0 D5 f8 E4 e9 b1 T $ b0 R# o4 h7 r! E The "Market price program" is Green, protective, the variable true cost for high volume users, indexed on www.ieso.ca Avg. 2010 is 0.0340 kWh. You may enjoy the true cost, or adjust your investment in green energy, budget and to build better future. 4 J' N! |! N% `4 m4 O" e( v. b* Ref. Official link f6 L+ B/ J/ I% H" b4 l: Y* T6 {9 s1 h. Z4 _+ b. e! Q Enjoy whole-sale fixed rate, fix the risk, if your actual energy consumption is over 200,000 / Kwh, & 54,000 M3 in a year. Let's talk! ( q8 H' w6 F' ?, P

"Choose green, take charge! "; T. K* k6 V) Y. Z( j" r$ ?

0 ^- \0 b2 {2 R* V+ N2 @Yours truly, / @+ x. X! X0 O" D 6 h4 ? w, t. [0 _* e( h / z0 @# f8 y) P6 D; aLei, John. Zhang / q0 r1 D% F B6 o/ _ Independent Contractor (OEB. Licence) 4 _; \; I9 i' T2 X' x; gElectricity Retailer Licence No: ER-2005-0314 3 e5 P9 r. ]" T" b, Z5 s7 R) RGas Marketer Licence No: GM-2005-03144 J F' M! J G; _& s" [ Contractor No: 263453

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905 802 5896 ( Cell ) 905 333 8359 ( Fax ) 0 c" q/ J) V5 ~$ J( b0 P3 xE-mail: john.application.2009@gmail.com

# S' Y* `; c2 r3 d" ]0 S1 E+ OMore readings: "Electricity prices head upwards "

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Personal Notes: trying express everything Not more than 150 words, * thats why TOFEL & IELTS ask so!

Writing a business letter is, always, not an easy job. Can not remember how many times this letter had been edited,

In business, a short letter may make clients list longer, so, almost like "building a sword", in the past time for a solider.

Today, people hates "Tele-marketing" the cost-saving tool has turned people down.

So old business method comes back, "keep it short", use possible less, and shorter words as you can...

this reminds me of Don, and ...he said, "the keys of writing down any ideas are clear, short, true to the fact,

and concise as well."

Same as it is in a format of e-mail, try to give a few links that offers more info, references, and it's useful for your readers.

Same as in the Faxes. Lenthy sentences should be avoided.

Keeping the letter not more than 10 lines, or less than five paragraphes, and try to keep within 150-180 words?

People are now impatient, and some of them do not read more than 2-3 minutes.

Luckily, in northern America, people don't really care about formailities, and "too good writings",

....rather, but prefer making good sence.

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When finish, give a second readinds, or read alaud to yourself, then choose "Action Verbs" to give a vivid and strong title!

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一语,

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